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By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 14:23:06 +0000

Interesting thought on how much Six needs Mister Rich!

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 14:21:27 +0000

Thank you! Mister Rich is voiced by my roommate, David Bounds. He has a suitably angry voice. :)

By: Iefow

Iefow — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 08:04:29 +0000

Too much information is left in Mr Rich for Six to bail on him now. This is maybe the most disturbing bit about this episode: Rich has every oppertunity to string Six along for as long as he wants. Just handfeed him some tidbits of information and hint towards more vital bits of info yet to come. For now, Six can’t afford not to continue on with Rich, but this is a situation Six will have to deal with eventually… can’t wait to see what’ll happen!

By: Asylos

Asylos — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 23:48:33 +0000

I like Mr. Rich. The voice is quite good.

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 16:52:05 +0000

Insightful thoughts as always, Jim. Thanks!

By: Jim Ryan

Jim Ryan — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 00:33:20 +0000

Hmm. I can see the instinct to flee being very high at the moment, especially since we know VI has sucked all the information he can out of Rich for the time being. But in the end I decided to go with talking to Mr. Rich because I think by finding out what he’s about to do that might provide at least one more piece of the puzzle. I’m thinking VI is probably going to have to run away from Rich at some point but just now might be a little too soon.

Additionally, I see I’ve voted differently from Rob, which hopefully means all is right with the world once again. :)

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 17:46:16 +0000

I would laugh, but that’s actually pretty accurate. I’m pretty damned cruel to my protagonists. :P

By: Cyril Pasteau

Cyril Pasteau — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 17:06:06 +0000

I voted for Mr. Rich too. He still has answers Six could pry from his mouth or from his dead body.

I would also like to propose an alternative version of the text:
“I punch the wall in frustration. Who the fuck am I? What the hell is going on with me? Why is every answer a doorway to another fucking question? Who the hell is this man in the football jacket? Why am I surrounded by violence and death? Suddenly I realize I’m a character in a fiction by Eddy Webb, which means an unwholesome fate and a violent death are to be my lot. Fuck! If that is so, I will not let go without a fight! Eddy can throw as many npcs at me as he wants, I can be meaner that he thinks I am!”

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 16:34:24 +0000

Thanks for the comments, as always!

By: N.E. White

N.E. White — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 15:17:13 +0000

Great character development here Eddy. Glad you are back in the saddle writing.

I’ve always voted according to what I thought was best for the character but this time…I just don’t know what Six can do…who to trust? I’m not sure he can trust himself. I’m going for Mr. Rich.

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 14:58:58 +0000

I’m certainly not going to be upset that you’re becoming sympathetic to the main character. :D

By: Rob

Rob — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 14:11:18 +0000

Totally. If I was voting as a reader, where I think the story could get more interesting/complicated then I would have voted to Attract the attention of the police and try to go with them. Conflict leads to interesting developments.

I’m starting to relate to VI more now, so I found it easy to vote with his mindset. I think it would make the story more coherent. I mean, its illogical to run off to the police but as a reader it could provide some interesting twists to the story.

By: Eddy Webb

Eddy Webb — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 14:06:34 +0000

Yeah, there’s been a lot of information thrown out there recently, to move from “complete blank” to “conspiracy mystery.” I expect episode seven will be more action-oriented. Interesting that you voted as VI instead of as a reader this time — do you think you would have voted differently the other way around?

By: Rob

Rob — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 13:44:10 +0000

Another great episode Eddy… although its getting to the point where I need to sit down and re-read everything. I’ve lost track of a few bits of information. Haha. Enjoying the hell out of it as always and like always on with my options break down.

First, nice to have a limited number of options this time. Last week was such a hard decision, picking just two questions off of a list that I want answers to all of them.

This week instead of voting like a reader I voted like I was VI. Thinking over my options and making the decision I’d make in his place.

Attract the attention of the police and try to go with them: This just seems like a colossally bad idea. I mean, VI has killed people. What’s he going to tell the police? Just seems too risky. No, I’d rather try something else.

Walk over to Mister Rich and see what he has planned: I almost voted for this one, Rich seems to be willing to help VI but then something hit me… He turned him over to these people once before. I don’t think we can trust him.

Run away from all of them and try to make it on my own: When all else fails you always have yourself. I think its time VI left Rich in the dust and started trying to sort all this out on his own again. Where he would go, I don’t know… but I just don’t trust any of this situation.